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a'top The Hancock Tower, Chicago, IL
Me & Rob (my boyfriend)
a'top The Hancock Tower, Chicago, IL
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February
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- studio final: concept statement
- studio final: site analysis
- studio final: research & exploration
- studio final: site & roof plan
- studio final: plan
- studio final: section
- studio final: elevations
- studio final: model & perspectives
- possible exterior perspective views
- possible interior perspective views
- Possible building section cuts
- The power of a mid-day lunch
- Studio Draft: Section
- Sections never lie...
- Studio Draft: Plan
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Person . Place
- kschommer
- Prior Lake, Minnesota, United States
4 comments:
Hi Kate,
Nice sections! I like how you applied the colors to separate the spaces. Only one thing though, I think the existing background might be a little bit too much. Maybe, you can lighten it a bit (add some gray tones or use one use one color) so we can focus more on the sections. Keep up the great work!
I agree with Jenny on your context. Another thing that would help is some annotations, just labeling the spaces would clear up a lot of things. The people are great, it really lets you understand the scale of the spaces.
Kate,
the silloute people and site/building furniture are a good plus to your drawings. The scale becomes very easy to read, and they don't distract the drawing. The background images of the site context do distract. The problem is that they are at a different resolution then the rest of your model. If there is a way to tone the background down, it will only strengthen your already great looking drawings.
Kate,
Nice sections, they have a very clear and concise manor to them. It is interesting to look at the sections and the iso sketch that you have in the previous post and compare the ideas that are flowing througout. I especially like how the outdoor sitting areas are situated on the edge so they overlook specific areas. I was a little confused about where each section was taken from but the colors are helpful when following a volume from section to section. Looks great.
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